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I want to make a comic series. Web comic? Need to learn how to Art I guess :/

As you may or may not know, Doctor Doom is the ruler of a European country called Latveria. Despite being ruled with an iron fist by one of the most evil villains in the Universe, it's really quite charming! Kind of like a communist version of Belgium, with lederhosen and beer and sausage and oppression and poverty.

MY idea is to follow the lives of those brave men and women who serve on the Latverian Bureau of Tourism. Amongst the normal office folk, I figure there are plenty of second-string and third-string villains that Doom has helped "go straight" over the years in order to just get them out of the way, maybe even a few brainwashed super heroes who don't remember their heroic past. SO while our overall plot will be something like drumming up interest in Septemberfest, we'll allow for B and C plotlines as well that focus on Carl from accounting having to keep blasting Mike Heroman from the Graphics Department with the mind-wipe ray every time he starts becoming heroic, or Sally from Human Resources having to confront The Killer Tiger about his inappropriate "native attire" on Casual Friday. And of course, Doom comes in and murders the department head once a month or so replacing them with a new guy.

Date: 2013-04-09 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zombie1974.livejournal.com
Yes, this idea is truly brilliant. Stick-figure it up and I'll flesh it out!

Date: 2013-04-09 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-slinky.livejournal.com
Oh hi there! I missed you :)

I'm working on a script right now :) Was thinking I could even do it with public domain clip art, since I picture everyone in the office dressing in late-80's/early-90's fashions (they're just now getting the first season of Sienfeld over there).

The first three-panel gag strip I'm writing involves Karen from HR and Lord Tiger.

PANEL 1:
KAREN: "Mister Tiger, thank you so much for coming in! I'd like to talk to you about-"
TIGER: (Interrupting) "LORD Tiger!"
KAREN: "Excuse me? I..."

PANEL 2:
TIGER: "YOu may address me as LORD TIGER, Scourge of the night! With the power of TEN TIGERS, granted to me when I stole The Idol Of The Ancients from that Jungle Shrine so long ago! Forever cursed for my crime, I stalk the night in search of HE BLOOD OF THE INNOCENT in order to quench my unholy thirst!"

PANEL 3:
KAREN: (Looking at file in her hands) "It says here your name is 'Kyle'..."
TIGER: "YES! LORD KYLE TIGER! YOU MAY-"
KAREN: "-And that your criminal record involves little more than two attempts to steal delicious Hostess Fruit Pies?"
TIGER: "It says that?"
KAREN: "Please have a seat, Mister Tiger."

Date: 2013-04-09 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zombie1974.livejournal.com
That's AWESOME! I'm excited about this idea.

Date: 2013-04-09 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-slinky.livejournal.com
It occurs to me that I lack even the skillz to stick-figure this script :( Care to try your hand at artifying it free-style, bring your artistic vision to the process? Verbal agreement that any money we would ever make (we're not gonna make any mony, but y'know...) is split 50/50?

Character designs (thus far): Karen is a 1990's business woman, Shoulder pads to invoke power, poodle-mullet with hoop ear rings to emote femininity.

Kyle "Lord" Tiger is standard businessman, suit and tie, luchadore Tiger mask that may or may not be his actual face. Oh, and paws instead of hands.

Date: 2013-04-09 10:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] aurora77
I would so read this! DO EEET!

Date: 2013-04-09 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-slinky.livejournal.com
I'm up for it as long as [livejournal.com profile] zombie1974 is! Because I don't know how to art, I only know how to wordify things :( We could be the next Gabe and Tyco!

Date: 2013-04-09 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zombie1974.livejournal.com
Honestly, the panel blocking and arranging panel vs. script would be too time consuming for me. That's always been the big barrier to my making a comic. I just haven't figured out a good way to efficiently block out panels and figure out how much to put where. If I can get the most basic of storyboard and panel arranging done for me, I can pick up the ball and run with it after that.

Date: 2013-04-09 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-slinky.livejournal.com
________ ________ ________
+ + + + + +
+ + + + + +
+ X O + + X + + X O +
--------------- --------------- ---------------

Okay, here we go... the "X" is Kyle Tiger, th "O" is Karen. GO!

What, you need more? :P

Working on it :)

Date: 2013-04-09 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-slinky.livejournal.com
ASCII does not transslate well here...

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